Grade 9 · Close Reading and Complex Characters · Complex Characters and Structure

Structure, Order and Suspense

Reading: LiteratureExtension45 min

Analyse how ordering, pacing and withheld information create tension and meaning.

Learning objectives

  • Identify non-linear structural choices
  • Explain how withheld information creates suspense
  • Evaluate the effect of a structural choice on meaning

Common Core ELA alignment

  • RL.9-10.5

    Analyse how a particular sentence, chapter, scene or stanza fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of theme, setting or plot. Grades 9–10 emphasis: sustain a line of analysis across complex texts, using precise evidence and a formal academic register.

  • RL.9-10.1

    Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what a literary text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. Grades 9–10 emphasis: sustain a line of analysis across complex texts, using precise evidence and a formal academic register.

  • RL.9-10.4

    Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings, and analyse the impact of word choice on meaning and tone. Grades 9–10 emphasis: sustain a line of analysis across complex texts, using precise evidence and a formal academic register.

MYP criteria

  • Criterion AAnalysing
  • Criterion DUsing language

ENGAGE

Start with the ending

A story that opens with the funeral and then goes back six months does not spoil itself. It changes the question from what happens to why and how, and every scene now carries dread.

Think about it

  • What question does the reader carry after such an opening?
  • What does the writer lose by giving away the ending?

EXPLAIN

Structural tools

ToolDefinitionEffect to analyse
In medias resBeginning in the middle of actionImmediacy, delayed context
FlashbackMoving to an earlier timeExplains motive, slows present
ForeshadowingPlanting a hint of what is to comeDread and later satisfaction
WithholdingDelaying key informationSuspense and re-reading
Parallel plotTwo strands intercutComparison and irony

Pacing

  • Short sentences and short scenes accelerate.
  • Description, reflection and dialogue-free passages decelerate.
  • A cliffhanger is a structural cut, not a plot event.

Answer stem

By placing X before Y, the writer makes the reader ... , which supports the theme of ...

EXPLORE

Two orderings

Order A: The brothers argue. One leaves the country. Years later a letter arrives.

Order B: A letter arrives and is left unopened for three chapters. Interleaved flashbacks show the argument and the departure.

Think about it

  • What does order B gain that order A does not?
  • What does order B risk?

MYP_PRACTICE

Criterion A and D task

Take a short story you know. Re-plan it in a different order, then write 200 words evaluating what your new order gains and loses, using the answer stem twice.

EXIT_TICKET

Check yourself

Think about it

  • Name one structural choice you noticed in your current reading.
  • How does withholding differ from foreshadowing?

Interactive practice · reorder

Reorder the scenes

Arrange the scenes into two different orders and predict the effect of each.

Scenes

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Key vocabulary

In medias res
Starting a narrative in the middle of the action.
Foreshadowing
An early hint of a later event.
Withholding
Deliberately delaying information the reader wants.
Pacing
The speed at which a narrative moves.

Practice questions

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Level 1 · Criterion A

An unopened letter left for three chapters is an example of

Level 2 · Criterion A

What does interleaving flashbacks with a present-day strand most enable?

MYP criterion tasks

Level 3 · Criterion D

Evaluate what order B gains and risks.

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