Grade 7 · Writing to Persuade · Argument Essays
Narrative Writing that Shows, Not Tells
Plan a story arc.
Learning objectives
- Plan a story arc
- Replace telling sentences with sensory detail
- Use dialogue to reveal character
AERO English Language Arts alignment
AERO.ELA.7.W.3
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences using effective technique, relevant descriptive detail and well-structured event sequences. Grade 7 / MYP 2 emphasis: work independently with two related texts and explain how a writer's choices create effects.
AERO.ELA.7.W.4
Produce clear and coherent writing in which development, organisation and style are appropriate to task, purpose and audience. Grade 7 / MYP 2 emphasis: work independently with two related texts and explain how a writer's choices create effects.
AERO.ELA.7.W.2
Write informative and explanatory texts that examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts and information through selection, organisation and analysis of content. Grade 7 / MYP 2 emphasis: work independently with two related texts and explain how a writer's choices create effects.
AERO.ELA.7.W.7
Conduct short research projects to answer a question or solve a problem, drawing on several sources and refocusing the inquiry when appropriate. Grade 7 / MYP 2 emphasis: work independently with two related texts and explain how a writer's choices create effects.
AERO.ELA.7.W.9
Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection and research. Grade 7 / MYP 2 emphasis: work independently with two related texts and explain how a writer's choices create effects.
MYP criteria
- Criterion A — Analysing
- Criterion C — Producing text
ENGAGE
Step Into the Moment
Imagine that you are about to present a project to a crowded hall. You know your subject, but your hands feel unsteady and your notes suddenly disappear. A writer could simply say, “I was nervous.” However, a strong narrative lets the reader notice the shaking hands, hear the echoing voices and understand the character through actions and dialogue. In this lesson, you will compare two versions of one event before planning and writing your own vivid scene.
Think about it
- How can a reader recognise fear without being told?
- What can dialogue reveal about a character?
EXPLORE
Two Versions of the Same Event
Text A: Telling the Event
Mariam was nervous about presenting her desert-ecology model at Education City. She entered the hall and saw many students. Her display card fell behind the table, so she became more worried. Her friend Noura encouraged her. Mariam found the card, began her talk and answered a difficult question. At the end, the judges thanked her, and she felt proud because she had overcome her fear.
Text B: Showing the Event
The glass doors slid apart, and cool air brushed Mariam's dusty trainers. Voices echoed beneath the high roof. She tightened both hands around her model of a desert plant. As she reached the table, her display card slipped free and skated underneath it. Mariam's throat closed. Without that card, the carefully practised opening had vanished. Noura crouched beside her. “Start with what you noticed in the desert,” she said. “You know that better than anyone.” Mariam breathed in. The hall smelled of paper, paint and warm electronics. She retrieved the bent card but placed it face down. When a judge asked how the plant saved water, Mariam traced the waxy leaf on her model. “Its surface slows water loss,” she replied, and her voice carried to the back row. Noura raised one thumb. Mariam's shoulders loosened. This time, her smile arrived before the applause.
Think about it
- Which details in Text B allow you to infer that Mariam is nervous?
- How does Noura's dialogue reveal her character and relationship with Mariam?
- Where is the turning point in each text, and why does Text B make it more effective?
EXPLAIN
How Writers Show Experience
1. Build a clear story arc
- Opening: establish the character, setting and situation.
- Rising action: introduce a problem and increase tension.
- Climax: present the most important decision, discovery or action.
- Falling action: show the immediate result of the climax.
- Resolution: reveal what has changed or been learned.
| Telling | Showing | Effect |
|---|---|---|
| Mariam was nervous. | She tightened both hands around her model. | The action lets the reader infer her emotion. |
| Noura encouraged her. | “You know that better than anyone.” | The exact words reveal Noura's confidence in her friend. |
| Mariam became calmer. | Mariam's shoulders loosened. | A physical change makes the emotion visible. |
Choose sensory details carefully
Include details that help the reader see, hear, smell, feel or notice movement. Do not list every sensation. Select details that strengthen the mood or move the event forward.
Dialogue should do more than fill silence. It can reveal a character's confidence, concerns, knowledge or attitude. Keep each line purposeful. Use quotation marks around spoken words, place punctuation inside the closing quotation mark and begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes.
Showing does not mean removing every telling sentence
Telling can connect events quickly. Show the most important moments, especially the conflict and climax, but summarise less important actions when necessary.
When analysing the two texts, explain the effect of a specific choice. Text A communicates the full sequence efficiently, while Text B slows down key moments through sensory detail, action and dialogue. This helps the audience experience Mariam's tension and relief. In persuasive writing, a short, truthful narrative can also engage readers before an argument, but its style and content must still suit the purpose and audience.
MYP_PRACTICE
Transform a Telling Scene
Write a 120–160-word scene about a student facing a manageable challenge, such as beginning a National Sport Day activity or explaining an exhibit. Create a complete story arc, replace important telling statements with sensory evidence and include purposeful dialogue that reveals character.
- Choose a character, setting, audience and manageable challenge.
- Plan the opening, rising action, climax and resolution in brief notes.
- Select two sensory details that create the mood without slowing the scene.
- Add one or two lines of dialogue that reveal an attitude or relationship.
- Draft and revise, checking that the ending shows a meaningful change.
EXIT_TICKET
Before you close this lesson
Think about it
- Which detail in your scene shows emotion most effectively, and what can the reader infer?
- How did your story arc and style suit your intended audience?
Watch
How to write descriptively - Nalo Hopkinson
TED-Ed · 5 min
Learn how sensory details and carefully chosen language can help readers experience a scene.
Before you watch: Which sensory details help you picture a place most clearly?
- How can specific verbs and nouns strengthen a description?
- Describe an ordinary place using details from at least three senses.
Interactive practice · show not tell scene
From Plan to Vivid Narrative
Use the planning fields to create a complete 120–160-word narrative. Your scene must include a manageable challenge, a clear climax, at least two relevant sensory details and dialogue that reveals character.
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Task
Choose one suitable school or community setting and develop a focused scene.
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Prompts
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Key vocabulary
- story arc
- The organised path of a story from its opening to its resolution.
- sensory detail
- A detail connected to sight, sound, smell, taste, touch or movement.
- dialogue
- The spoken words exchanged by characters in a text.
- climax
- The moment of greatest tension or most important action in a story.
Practice questions
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Level 1 · Criterion A
Which sentence most clearly shows Mariam's nervousness through physical action?
Level 2 · Criterion A
What is the main effect of the phrase “her voice carried to the back row”?
Level 2 · Criterion C
Which line of dialogue best reveals a supportive character?
MYP criterion tasks
Level 2 · Criterion C
Rewrite “Salim was worried about starting the race” so that it shows his worry through action and one sensory detail.
Level 3 · Criterion C
Plan a four-stage story arc about a student solving a problem at a school exhibition. Explain one style choice that will suit a Grade 7 audience.
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